tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post8267263794560023758..comments2024-03-26T08:36:54.498+01:00Comments on The Creative Forum: The 400-Word Story: The Beach Man #2Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05328618234001371285noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-43681959614141200322013-05-28T22:00:11.777+01:002013-05-28T22:00:11.777+01:00Thanks, Christopher. I'm glad you're enjoy...Thanks, Christopher. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05328618234001371285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-82231867917873519242013-05-28T16:07:08.766+01:002013-05-28T16:07:08.766+01:00Liking how it unfolds. It's still pretty much ...Liking how it unfolds. It's still pretty much open at this stage and the less guess work, the better.<br />Some good touches to the character development too, especially with the word limit.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-35801672439366654712013-05-09T21:56:14.218+01:002013-05-09T21:56:14.218+01:00Thanks for the good words, Athina! :) I'm glad...Thanks for the good words, Athina! :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story.<br /><br />And thanks for reading! I hope I don't disappoint with the third. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05328618234001371285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-44330114136492153222013-05-09T15:06:34.779+01:002013-05-09T15:06:34.779+01:00Hmmm... this is interesting. I like the way the st...Hmmm... this is interesting. I like the way the story develops. <br />The scenery is good and I like the mystery that you have set up. <br />The barman sounds promising and I imagine that he might be her lover interest. Although he sounds a little creepy, but I like it.<br />Good story.<br />Keep writing. :)Athinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11485560779521386981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-88908233971376631572013-05-09T01:06:03.228+01:002013-05-09T01:06:03.228+01:00It comes out next Monday.
Thanks for reading! :)It comes out next Monday.<br /><br />Thanks for reading! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05328618234001371285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-44985605322176571172013-05-08T14:00:44.326+01:002013-05-08T14:00:44.326+01:00what a story, pls when is the third coming outwhat a story, pls when is the third coming outAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-79547420710560872672013-05-07T09:13:37.243+01:002013-05-07T09:13:37.243+01:00'Hollywood version of Nollywood'? Wow! I l...'Hollywood version of Nollywood'? Wow! I like that. And the movie too. :)I'm glad you like the story, and I apprecite your stopping by.<br /><br />Thanks for reading!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05328618234001371285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-50970974070196027042013-05-07T09:01:12.455+01:002013-05-07T09:01:12.455+01:00Dude u r d hollywood version of nollywood.ur suspe...Dude u r d hollywood version of nollywood.ur suspense is amazin.plz keep it up.guess @ d end u'l b d first 2 mke nigeria recognised in oscar awards wen ur write-up bcums a muvee.can't wait 4d nxt episode...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-37973587568542226552013-05-07T08:36:32.313+01:002013-05-07T08:36:32.313+01:00Thanks, Uzoma. I'm glad you like it. About the...Thanks, Uzoma. I'm glad you like it. About the set up...well, let's see where the story heads.<br /><br />Thanks for dropping by! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05328618234001371285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-54100868271319066372013-05-07T04:46:16.753+01:002013-05-07T04:46:16.753+01:00I didn't conclude my comment about the bar man...I didn't conclude my comment about the bar man: the card he handed Ifeoma has heightened the tension. I fear that this may be a set up. KayKay, you are amazing. Uzomahttp://85degrees.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-54471361598630818872013-05-07T04:38:22.513+01:002013-05-07T04:38:22.513+01:00Stunning! Absolutely stunning. There is enough ten...Stunning! Absolutely stunning. There is enough tension here and I love how you created an indifferent attitude in Ifeoma's girl friend. Then the bar man who hands her a card. Man! I am a bit scared. There is so much in here. Please write on.Uzomahttp://85degrees.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-75057336189600920562013-05-07T02:25:27.117+01:002013-05-07T02:25:27.117+01:00Thanks, Omolara. I'm really glad you like the ...Thanks, Omolara. I'm really glad you like the story, and I appreciate your coming back to check out the second episode.<br /><br />Happy Reading!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05328618234001371285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-83697259430969503742013-05-07T02:23:16.208+01:002013-05-07T02:23:16.208+01:00I'm glad you're enjoying this, Robyn. And ...I'm glad you're enjoying this, Robyn. And thanks for the suggestion. You're right. I'm going to apply it when I get on my PC.<br /><br />Thanks for stopping by! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05328618234001371285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-80071008289145768882013-05-07T02:15:11.437+01:002013-05-07T02:15:11.437+01:00Thanks, Blogger-Buddy! :) I'm glad you like it...Thanks, Blogger-Buddy! :) I'm glad you like it. <br /><br />Happy Reading!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05328618234001371285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-73332119125655128842013-05-07T02:06:17.448+01:002013-05-07T02:06:17.448+01:00Hmmm...well done again Mr Kay, u didn't disapp...Hmmm...well done again Mr Kay, u didn't disappoint at all.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10049212263279876224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-9356870204306271082013-05-07T00:11:54.535+01:002013-05-07T00:11:54.535+01:00The girl's friends are completely uncaring abo...The girl's friends are completely uncaring about her fears. I really like that. And I love that she has a plan of action ahead of her, Spiritual Consultant. Great lead up to the next installment. I would say this part, "I know that, although he tries to hide it" may not be necessary since the next line implies his infatuation is intended to be secret. Kaykay, I really feel like I'm right there with her.robgirlbookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03398614063792587098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-38410963713959189152013-05-06T22:23:37.173+01:002013-05-06T22:23:37.173+01:00Ooohh, this sounds fantastic and super exciting! I...Ooohh, this sounds fantastic and super exciting! I love it!! Thank for sharing :)!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16310114595444287383noreply@blogger.com