tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post8694487659955726077..comments2024-03-26T08:36:54.498+01:00Comments on The Creative Forum: The 400-Word Story: The Beach Man #10Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05328618234001371285noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-14186623298658174622013-07-17T21:15:10.094+01:002013-07-17T21:15:10.094+01:00Thanks a lot, Doc. :)Thanks a lot, Doc. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05328618234001371285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-55515491821682039722013-07-16T09:59:31.650+01:002013-07-16T09:59:31.650+01:00Mehinks ye did right. I can't say you added it...Mehinks ye did right. I can't say you added it at a worn time. so, good call there.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-50932789326513823182013-07-09T22:08:20.317+01:002013-07-09T22:08:20.317+01:00No, I didn't think you sounded clichéd. I'...No, I didn't think you sounded clichéd. I'm glad you liked the NYSC connection. I'd wanted to add it in the earlier episodes, to give the characters life and purpose, at least let readers know they didn't just jump into that strange community. But I didn't want to fix the wrong info at the wrong places, so I omitted that. I knew I'd have to add it sometime. <br /><br />Thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed it.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05328618234001371285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-24694400764971597922013-07-09T12:38:18.441+01:002013-07-09T12:38:18.441+01:00I am enjoying this. Now we don't even know whi...I am enjoying this. Now we don't even know which aspect of the story is real or a dream. And it's fun noting that she dreams the future these days. Hehehe.<br />Also liked that connection to NYSC. True about some strange things that happen in NYSC.<br /><br />For sounding shamelessly cliché, I also miss the killer.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-83013126491617300412013-07-07T21:44:13.156+01:002013-07-07T21:44:13.156+01:00Thanks a lot, Florentine. I'm glad you liked t...Thanks a lot, Florentine. I'm glad you liked this. Thanks for stopping by.<br /><br />Have a great week! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05328618234001371285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-21620533966114192672013-07-06T22:15:30.262+01:002013-07-06T22:15:30.262+01:00Beautifully written and sounds super exciting! I l...Beautifully written and sounds super exciting! I love reading these and I can't wait to read the next episode! :)<br /><br />Florentine @ <a href="http://readiculously-peachy.blogspot.co.uk" rel="nofollow">Readiculously Peachy</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16310114595444287383noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-41404546664282851802013-07-04T21:13:46.098+01:002013-07-04T21:13:46.098+01:00Haha! I also thought that Shola might be the kille...Haha! I also thought that Shola might be the killer, but I don't know yet. Maybe we'll know in the next episode. :)<br /><br />Thanks for reading, Nwa nne m. :) Udo diri gi.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05328618234001371285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-47248719401204272082013-07-04T21:11:15.340+01:002013-07-04T21:11:15.340+01:00Haha! :) Thanks for reading, Seun. :)
Have a wond...Haha! :) Thanks for reading, Seun. :)<br /><br />Have a wonderful week!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05328618234001371285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-91447324450131789832013-07-03T19:25:54.783+01:002013-07-03T19:25:54.783+01:00The element of horror seeping from Ifeoma's dr...The element of horror seeping from Ifeoma's dream into her reality creates more tension in this episode. Her conversation with Chika only shows that things are about to take another turn which I eagerly wait to see. Introducing Shola is another dice on the table--quite and interesting and intriguing. But for some reason I feel this Shola is not the real Shola. Maybe the killer has taken up her form to further torment Ifeoma. Nwa, jisi ike. Uzomahttp://85degrees.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-52659426165765170032013-07-03T14:37:23.389+01:002013-07-03T14:37:23.389+01:00Guy! You know na!
Well done! Wooooo!Guy! You know na!<br /><br />Well done! Wooooo!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-50648478470330826502013-07-03T10:32:22.978+01:002013-07-03T10:32:22.978+01:00Thanks for reading, Eface. I'm glad you loved ...Thanks for reading, Eface. I'm glad you loved the NYSc connection. Helps give the story more life and the characters purpose.<br /><br />Have a great week! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05328618234001371285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-51229124810653496872013-07-03T10:31:05.740+01:002013-07-03T10:31:05.740+01:00Thanks for reading, Athina. Thanks for the suggest...Thanks for reading, Athina. Thanks for the suggestion. I thought I should reveal her identity in this episode. The next episodes might answer your questions. <br /><br />Have a great week, too! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05328618234001371285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-85863856310706320232013-07-03T10:26:07.683+01:002013-07-03T10:26:07.683+01:00"You got me hooked on the bad guy and I misse..."You got me hooked on the bad guy and I missed him" You missed him, eh? I missed him, too. :) I'm glad you liked the aspects of the NYSC. I thought it would answer the questions of setting, or stuffs like the characters' job.<br /><br />Yeah, the spiritualist has a twin. Maybe your questions would be answered next week.<br /><br />Thanks for reading, Robyn. Have a wonderful week, too. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05328618234001371285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-83904128617374691142013-07-02T11:18:31.499+01:002013-07-02T11:18:31.499+01:00Dude,d connection wit nysc mke sense,nd evn ds sho...Dude,d connection wit nysc mke sense,nd evn ds shola,I wonda weda na d real shola or na d beachman in disguise.cos d beachman is always a step ahead.goodwrk man.E'FACEAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-73911680423009341582013-07-02T11:17:12.649+01:002013-07-02T11:17:12.649+01:00Dude,d connection wit nysc mke sense,nd evn ds sho...Dude,d connection wit nysc mke sense,nd evn ds shola,I wonda weda na d real shola or na d beachman in disguise.cos d beachman is always a step ahead.goodwrk man.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-81819510868400691732013-07-02T09:22:04.509+01:002013-07-02T09:22:04.509+01:00Well, as the story goes I want to know more. How t...Well, as the story goes I want to know more. How the spiritualist and her sister are involved in the story? What the killer really wants? I look forward for the next one. <br /><br />One little suggestion: I would cut the scene the moment Shola Adeniyi introduces herself. I guess the reader understands she is the spiritualist's twin. Plus, it add more tension. <br /><br />Happy week Kaykay. :)Athinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11485560779521386981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-44630530953926222.post-76155401341552506442013-07-02T00:44:27.869+01:002013-07-02T00:44:27.869+01:00I love that you included aspects of your culture l...I love that you included aspects of your culture like NYSC and Corpers. So the spiritualist has a twin. Why is she there? To help catch the real villain or take revenge on our distressed heroine? You got me hooked on the bad guy and I missed him, but I'm happy that someone in Ifeoma's circle finally takes her dreams seriously. As always, I can't wait for the next one! <br /><br />Have a great week, Kaykay!!robgirlbookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03398614063792587098noreply@blogger.com